Aet Lindling

Yeah, you're probably right. Thanks for the advice!

Chapter 2: Aello ( ay -lo) Aello took the steaming loaves of bread out of the large oven, her experienced hands sliding the oval shapes off the pan and into ...

Oh, it was scriblist! I see.

You should try to get this published in a book of short stories! Lengthen it a bit and it's great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry about t

Hmm. Most haikus I've seen have them (titles), but thanks for giving me that idea! Adds interest to it. I wasn't designing them to do that, explain what they are ...

What??? Did it win 2nd or 3rd?

There we go! Tis fixed! I like this better anyway, because "stain" expresses negativity.

DANG IT! Hmm...

Thanks! I was kind of surprised, actually, that I came up with anything worth posting, because all I was doing was coming up with random subjects, and with no planning ...

Thanks! More will probably come in maybe a couple of days.

di-nuh- kiss . (heh, i'm a geek. i even remember to show the syllable to stress. :D)

I repeat, sensible males would too! :lol:

Whoa.

grr... it would have been funnier if you had said "yes...i tend to do that to much..." :)

Cool story, bro. I just noticed one little thing that bothered me, wherever you said "to", you usually meant "too". Sorry, just thought I'd point that out.